UDescription:on March 8th the year 5&6s left for camp El Rancho in Waikanae. When we got to El Rancho the girls went and got there cabins ready while the boys had a look around and we swapped over. The second day we did pool,archery,mini golf and we went to the beach in the middle of that David (our principal) came and spent the rest of the day with us after everything we wrote in our camp diaries about our day. The third day we did water slide,rifles,horses instead of having four activities we had three and free time which we can play on everything except for the thing that you need permission of supervision. The forth day we had two activities which are kayak and horses and a lots of cleanings do we got ready to go home we stopped at levin adventure park to have a play and to eat
We also wrote in our camp dairy every night before we went to sleep here are some pics
Feedback/Feedforward make your writing bigger. Other than that it is good. Luke.
I thin that I should really get better handwriting
Hey guys for the last few weeks we have been gathering information about our families and making a family tree first you did a paper version then we put it into either a poster,online or something else that you thought of that you think would work. Then after that you think that you've gone all the way back in your generations that you can go you have to also include the translation for that person but not there actual name just like mum or dad and so on.
Here's my finished product and also the translations hope you like it😄😄😄😄
Feed back: I like how you have explained all of your family. I also like the way you split your mum and dad so I know which is which
Feed forward: not much you can work on you have done a very good whakapapa.#sam
We chose a word. Mine is best so I am going to try be the best that I can be at everything. We also made a tweet about our one word and why we chose it. I chose it because I haven't been the best that I can be. Everyone made some one word art with a photo that Elly took of us pretending to hold a sign. Also we got a piece of paper that cut and measured so it fits in the gap in between our hands.
Here's a photo of the finished product
Feedback/feedforward:I like how you made it so it suits you and and people know it's yours no feedforward - it's perfect
I agree with you Kyan I think to that is perfect but I think that next time make it stand out a bit more by making it a dark background and light colours for the word.